Janet,
I'll keep your comment on 'Tower' in mind although at the moment I quite
like the current arrangment.
Appreciate you reading it.
Thanks for the comment.
Tina
> When I read the poem I assumed that you were writing about formal gardens.
> Not having been there, I didn't think of humans on benches or incongruous
> flower arrangements. Perhaps it might be a more powerful comment if you
> described these explicitly?
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