> I long since stopped asking "Is this a poem?" I really did sit down
> with a Met Boheme yesterday afternoon because unemployment brings
> supreme boredom. The whole "is this a poem" thing stems from a complete
> absence of clever lines, zingers, imagery, or much of anything except a
> narrative. Yet I like it and worked rather hard on it. So what? Have
> fun with it.
Of course it's a poem!
It's a poem of unadorned truth, as so many of yours are.
Not many people are able to write this way as effectively.
Janet
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Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
"As long as space remains,
as long as sentient beings remain,
until then, may I too remain
and dispel the miseries of the world."
Shantideva
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