Hadn't quite thought of it that way, Jon, but, thanks for putting it
so; I agree. Enjoyed the shifts between speech & body there Janet...
Doug
On 10-May-06, at 10:10 AM, Jon Corelis wrote:
> It seems to be seduction poem week. This one is good in itself and an
> interesting recap (if I'm not reading this into it unjustifiably) of
> some of the recent topics in this group, which I suppose is why it's a
> snap. I think it can stand by itself as a poem, though, and doesn't
> need any changes.
>
> On 5/10/06, Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> black strings
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