Thanks Judy, I appreciate the comment!
-Peter
On 4/5/06, judy prince <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> "I think I would be wild then
> Sounding the radar depths of myself" .......
>
> lyric, plumbed-thru concert of images, fantastical juxtaposed words.
>
> I love this poem's power and completeness, Peter---caution-thrown
> beginning
> to ending.
>
> Joodles
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Peter Ciccariello" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Wednesday, April 05, 2006 10:41 PM
> Subject: Snap - Wild
>
>
> I think I would be wild then
> Sounding the radar depths of myself
> With untailored looks and
> Discarded prudence whose wind
> I would use for these hastily fashioned wings
> Sufficient to carry to speculate
> Adequate for the journey and
> Comforting if not in manufacture
> Then in philosophy of the expedition itself
> Whose impending congress yields to the other
> Of me cautious and precipitous with doom
> Having returned again to the starting point
> And finding myself still there
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> Peter Ciccariello
> Rhode Island, USA
> 4/5/2006 10:35:29 PM
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