thanks for your suggestions, Edmund, and it's
interesting the difference between the parts that you
and Sharon liked and how different each suggestion
makes it,
best,
Rebecca
--- Edmund Hardy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> i like this snap Rebecca, & (excuse me for ruining
> your elegant snap!) it
> could almost be:
>
> soft six-sided
> eyelashes of drift
> she says
> you'll get used to it
>
>
> E
>
>
> snap
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>
> overnight Massachusetts
> turning into snow
> tiny drops of falling ice,
> now these soft six-sided
> eyelashes of drift, the air
> itself falling, she says
> this is the place of false springs
> you'll get used to it
> I don't
>
> Rebecca Seiferle
> 12:01 4/5/06
> Waltham MA
>
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