Hi Roger, Stephen, Jon
Thanks for the comments. Yes, I want the ambiguity of "may" in the first
stanza, Roger; I can see what Jon means about dropping the first and last (I
very often drop first stanzas) but I will muse on that. It may be that
something that doesn't quite please me in the last will right itself.
All best
A
Alison Croggon
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