On 3/5/06, wild honey press <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Lawrence,
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> that fourth line really shakes up the zen inc tranquillity. I _like_ it.
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> A stopped clock,
> > a dark moon,
> > a mirror reflecting
> >
> > I hope I give no offence
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> best
>
> Randolph
>
offenSe! offenSe!
heh.
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