I think the last 3 stanzas of this are worth keeping;
the rest seems to be yet another poet moaning about the
futility of writing (as we do, sometimes;-)
Once we get to here
> Cold real voices:
it is no longer self-indulgent and it starts saying something
worth thinking about, in a new voice (Ken's poetic voice that
I like so much).
Janet
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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