How about this then
> a poet croaks
> on the silent air-conditioner
> beside the barbecue
> covered in cobwebs
>
P croaking P
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Sent: 12 January 2006 18:04
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Love this last stanza, Andrew:
> evening
> a frog croaks
> on the silent air-conditioner
> beside the barbecue
> covered in cobwebs
>
>
>
>
> Andrew Burke
> Bassendean
> 11/1/2006
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