Thank you so much Arthur. It has been dificult these past few years with so
much loss. But I feel like I am getting back to being myself again and
regaining my confidence both as a person and a writer. I get inspiration
from nature when I am walking my dogs. It has been dificult to know how to
write as creative writing tutors over the past years have doubted my
abilities and put me down quite a lot. I don't go to classes any more and
becoming more myself and developing in my own way. So maybe this is the way
forward. Your words give me much encouragement and I thank you for this.
Many best wishes Sally J
>From: Arthur Seeley <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub, Turning back the clock( Sally )
>Date: Sat, 4 Nov 2006 11:26:44 -0000
>
>Sally . I do not comment much on your work mainly because there is little I
>can say that would improve your poetry.
>I must say, however, that you are submitting some quite exceptional work
>these days. It is clear to me at least, that you have come through your
>dark time and this shows in the quality and depth of your pieces of work.
>Congratulations. Arthur
>----- Original Message ----- From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
>To: <[log in to unmask]>
>Sent: Saturday, November 04, 2006 10:18 AM
>Subject: new sub, Turning back the clock
>
>
>Turning back the clock.
>
>The moon, a foxes mad eye
>glares between stark branches
>of an unclothed tree.
>Spying in the twilight
>it creeps across moors
>still glowing from
>the aftermath of sunset.
>I walk upon the crumpled gown
>of autumn, each crackled tear
>sticking to my soul.
>Mist hovers in the hedgerows.
>Clouds circle my head, protect
>from the prickle of holly, yet
>droplets of berries still bleed
>in this star-less dusk.
>
>Sally James
>
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