Sally . I do not comment much on your work mainly because there is little I
can say that would improve your poetry.
I must say, however, that you are submitting some quite exceptional work
these days. It is clear to me at least, that you have come through your dark
time and this shows in the quality and depth of your pieces of work.
Congratulations. Arthur
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From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Saturday, November 04, 2006 10:18 AM
Subject: new sub, Turning back the clock
Turning back the clock.
The moon, a foxes mad eye
glares between stark branches
of an unclothed tree.
Spying in the twilight
it creeps across moors
still glowing from
the aftermath of sunset.
I walk upon the crumpled gown
of autumn, each crackled tear
sticking to my soul.
Mist hovers in the hedgerows.
Clouds circle my head, protect
from the prickle of holly, yet
droplets of berries still bleed
in this star-less dusk.
Sally James
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