Hi Sally,
I like the poem - but I'm wondering if the title's doing enough work. I
found myself thinking, "Should I Take The Mickey"? or "Who Will Take The
Mickey"? - I prefer the 2nd one.
Bob
>From: Sally James <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: new sub Mickey
>Date: Wed, 25 Oct 2006 03:19:10 +0100
>
>Mickey
>
>I have a new lodger.
>He is very quiet during the day.
>but at night I can hear him in the kitchen
>nibbling at the dog biscuits.
>I am terrified of him.
>So think I will get a cat.
>
>Sally James
>
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