Yes I know what you mean. I haven't got Poetry Scotland Mag as yet. So will
look forward to seeing which poem Sally chose. Bw Sally J
>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new Sub Autumn
>Date: Wed, 18 Oct 2006 14:36:45 +0000
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>Hi Sally,
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>I like the first stanza here but find the second rather cliched. I think
>everybody under the sun has done Autumn from Keats onwards and it really
>demands something else to be done with it as a subject in verse. Forgot to
>say I liked your poem in Poetry Scotland.
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>bw
>James
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>>From: Sally James <[log in to unmask]>
>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>Subject: new Sub Autumn
>>Date: Sat, 14 Oct 2006 20:15:36 +0100
>>
>> Autumn
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>>
>>Every soft sigh of earth mellows
>> in twilight hours
>>as the ancient tick of time echoes
>> over moon silvered moors.
>>
>>Not a sound to be heard
>>when each day shortens
>>only the creak of the oak tree
>> and groan of dead leaves
>> falling.
>>
>>Sally James
>
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