Thanks Matt. Best wishes sally J
>From: Matt Merritt <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Autumn
>Date: Sun, 15 Oct 2006 20:22:02 +0000
>
>Hi Sally,
>I liked the second stanza much more than the first too - not sure about the
>"not a sound", although as Bob says, perhaps it works well as something of
>a puzzle.
>The last three lines are great though. As Gill says, I think they could
>pretty well stand alone.
>Best wishes,
>Matt
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