Elusive, is a word that come to mind her Calaya, but that doesn't mean I
don't like it, in fact it's what I like about it. Nice piece about moon that
doesn't have June involved in some way, if you get what I mean.
bw
James
>From: calaya <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: new sub: Wild
>Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2006 10:03:49 -0700
>
>Hi everyone,
> finally, a wee bit I'd appreciate comments/crits on, if you please.
> looking forward
> calaya
> ~~~~~~~~~~
> Wild
>
> You say you want to get to know me;
> so, call me wild, like Moon.
>
> I never appear verbatim
> as I am in constant change-
> in a size and shape-shifting relationship
> danced with regular horizons.
>
> I say call me wild and I will meet you;
> as the earth meets the sky.
>
>
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