Hi Calaya,
Well worth the wait, IMO. I'm having some difficulty figuring out what's
going on here, but that's the poem's appeal for me. I've read it in two
quite different ways so far, but I don't see why any poem should immediately
give up all its secrets.
I like that line "I never appear verbatim" in particular.
Regards,
Matt
>From: calaya <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: new sub: Wild
>Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2006 10:03:49 -0700
>
>Hi everyone,
> finally, a wee bit I'd appreciate comments/crits on, if you please.
> looking forward
> calaya
> ~~~~~~~~~~
> Wild
>
> You say you want to get to know me;
> so, call me wild, like Moon.
>
> I never appear verbatim
> as I am in constant change-
> in a size and shape-shifting relationship
> danced with regular horizons.
>
> I say call me wild and I will meet you;
> as the earth meets the sky.
>
>
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