Hi Sally,
Thanks for your kind words. Yes there is a lot going on here, which is why
the formseemed so right for what I was trying to say. It is essentially a
love poem and exploring the emotions love produces.
bw
James
>From: Sally James <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub:meditation with cuneiform
>Date: Sun, 11 Jun 2006 12:06:38 +0100
>
>James, Everything seems to fall into place here and makes sense to me.
>Sometimes I find Pantoums don't always do this but this one works very well
>and has deep meaning behind it. Bw Sally J
>
>
>>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>Subject: New sub:meditation with cuneiform
>>Date: Sat, 10 Jun 2006 09:54:29 +0000
>>
>>Dear All, another of my pantoum sequence. Having fun with pantoums does
>>not yet sem to be a criminal offence. Many thanks for comments on the
>>supermarket trolley one. Time being tight these days I can't post or
>>comment as much as I would like.
>>
>>meditation with cuneiform
>>
>>back from the other side of the world you contemplate
>>the attraction of a new kind of pen
>>when you have returned to attain a sense of closure
>>what you saw in rain, was it definite?
>>
>>the attraction of a new kind of pen
>>it's somewhat akin to the blossoming of love
>>what you saw in rain, was it definite?
>>wonder if you could face those moments again
>>
>>it's somewhat akin to the blosoming of love
>>how malleable in clay cuneiform would be before it set
>>wonder if you could face those moments again
>>without a sense of sin or occasion
>>
>>how malleable in clay cuneiform would be before it set
>>the correct writing tool is always crucial
>>without a sense of sin or occasion
>>how stark the ink words look printed on paper
>>
>>the correct writing tool is always crucial
>>when you have returned to attain a sense of closure
>>how stark the ink words look printed on paper
>>back from the other side of the world you contemplate
>>
>>
>>bw
>>James
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