James, Everything seems to fall into place here and makes sense to me.
Sometimes I find Pantoums don't always do this but this one works very well
and has deep meaning behind it. Bw Sally J
>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New sub:meditation with cuneiform
>Date: Sat, 10 Jun 2006 09:54:29 +0000
>
>Dear All, another of my pantoum sequence. Having fun with pantoums does not
>yet sem to be a criminal offence. Many thanks for comments on the
>supermarket trolley one. Time being tight these days I can't post or
>comment as much as I would like.
>
>meditation with cuneiform
>
>back from the other side of the world you contemplate
>the attraction of a new kind of pen
>when you have returned to attain a sense of closure
>what you saw in rain, was it definite?
>
>the attraction of a new kind of pen
>it's somewhat akin to the blossoming of love
>what you saw in rain, was it definite?
>wonder if you could face those moments again
>
>it's somewhat akin to the blosoming of love
>how malleable in clay cuneiform would be before it set
>wonder if you could face those moments again
>without a sense of sin or occasion
>
>how malleable in clay cuneiform would be before it set
>the correct writing tool is always crucial
>without a sense of sin or occasion
>how stark the ink words look printed on paper
>
>the correct writing tool is always crucial
>when you have returned to attain a sense of closure
>how stark the ink words look printed on paper
>back from the other side of the world you contemplate
>
>
>bw
>James
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