I wonder about the lines: "Every day funereal and gray,/babies without
fathers oblivious." and wonder if they were omitted so those who could only
walk with assistance could then be linked with those who brought the treaty
back with them?
Bob
Bob, a good thought. I do want to retain the form, so I need to think hard
for a change.
Thanks.
Gary
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