Thanks Gary will look at this again, Best wishes Sally J
>From: Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub Heart ache
>Date: Mon, 17 Apr 2006 09:47:28 -0700
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>Sally, I like the feel and theme of this but here
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>It is out of sinc I thought
>doesn't know which rhythm to dance to.
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>the lines do not dance for me
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>Maybe
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>Out of sinc? It doesn't know
>which rhythm to dance to.
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>Smiles.
>
>Gary
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