Hi Ryfkah,
Thanks for the suggestion!
I think titles come from somewhere else in the mind than the place where the
poem comes from. Sometimes I think, to borrow a comment from Emily
Dickinson, titles ought to "tell it slant" - and that's what your suggestion
is doing.
Thanks,
Bob
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: Re: And sometimes...
>Date: Thu, 13 Apr 2006 14:01:18 EDT
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>Shalom Bob,
>
>I like this very much. It makes me reflect.
>
>How about something like "Skywriting" for a title?
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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