Thanks for the comment Calaya. I think you have something. There is sarcasm
there and I'll have a look at increasing it. I had an editor turn down some
work because it was villanelle and stated a dislike and proposed other
changes I didn't care for in other stuff, so it is a get back to some
extent.
bw
James
>From: calaya <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: today your reasoning
>Date: Mon, 13 Mar 2006 13:22:03 -0800
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>Hi James,
> yes, different; i'd prefer it if it were heavily sarcastic, rather than
>[or so it seems to me] near sarcastic. If you meant no sarcasm, the works
>seems a mirror. Either way, I mean no offense and so hope you take none..
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> "like a transient who is so poor
>he is born only to be poor then die"
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> for instance, for me, waaaaaaaay misses the sarcasm mark.
> Otherwise, it is interesting enough: I read several times.
>
> later,
> calaya
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