Thank you Gill for your soulful comments.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 03/06/2006 5:01:58 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< This is such a terrible poem, Ryfkah, terrible in the true sense that is,
the contrast of the baby murdered and then the new moon coming out is so
awful , it's unbearable. It's full of rage and very impassioned. I cannot
think of anyway to change anything. It is a poem purified by fire and leave
us burned in its flame.
sincerely,
Gill >>
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