I am very had on myself Gary but also listen to others comments as well so I
make it doubley hard. Thanks for comments. Bestwishes Sally J
>From: Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New Sub Discovering poetry
>Date: Wed, 4 Jan 2006 19:34:02 -0800
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>Sally, I could say several things about form etal, but nothing you haven't
>heard, esp for S1 and
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>Nature wrote the poem on the blank sheet of my mind
>jolted me back into reality.
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>which is prosey and might be
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>Nature wrote the poem
>on the blank sheet of my mind
>jolted me back into reality.
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>is there an and missing before jolted?
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>Write, it is healthy, even if the words do not seem right to you. And
>aren't we our own harshest critics?
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>Smiles.
>
>Gary
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>Gary's book, A River Transformed at http://www.lulu.com/content/178110
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>My blog at http://garydawg.blogspot.com/
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>December's FireWeed at www.mindfirerenew.com.
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