Thanks Ryfkah Glad you lile it. Bw Sally J
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: An old love poem
>Date: Mon, 20 Feb 2006 12:00:56 EST
>
>Shalom Sally,
>
>In a message dated 02/14/2006 1:23:02 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
>
><< petals of grandchildren
>on faded walls.
> >>
>
>What a profound ending! The poem works for me, taking the ordinary to
>poetic
>elegance.
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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