Thanks for crits Colin, will consider. I meant the plant was like a cotton
plant. It obviously wasnte a cooton plant becuase it was a lamb plant!
cheers
SallyE
on 19/2/06 10:17 am, Colin Dewar at [log in to unmask] wrote:
> Sally E,
>
> I like the sound of this poem with minor exceptions. Please see below for
> sugg'S IN CAPS. By the way "cotton-like plant" is a bit of a worry for me.
> Maybe I'm coming at it the wrong way but cotton comes from a plant. A bit
> like saying "mutton-like meat"? I guess I'm left wondering how it serves the
> poem.
>
> BW,
>
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