In a message dated 02/11/2006 4:49:33 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< on the quay shows where it has been -
it's moving away now with the tide and wonder
if maybe you could
part the waves like Moses >>
I love this ending James. You have a few typos I believe. Maybe South West
need not be capititalized.
Keep the poetry light shining.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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