Sally, many thanks indeed,
regards, Gill
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From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Monday, February 13, 2006 7:16 AM
Subject: Re: new sub. Taking Possession.
> Nothing to crit about this one Gill. A very good poem, good title . Works
on
> many layers for me. Like it a lot. Best wishes Sally J
>
>
> >From: Gill MCEVOY <[log in to unmask]>
> >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> >To: [log in to unmask]
> >Subject: new sub. Taking Possession.
> >Date: Sat, 11 Feb 2006 05:04:15 -0000
> >
> >from Gill McEvoy.
> >Hi everyone,
> >I'd be very grateful for comments/suggestions on this please.
> >
> >Taking Possession.
> >
> >As if someone had been modelling bird-legs
> >and these were the rejects
> >
> >a jangle of scrawny metal legs and feet
> >is thrust in my palm. They shiver
> >
> >on the car seat in clank and jingle,
> >their tangle of brass and steel joggling about.
> >
> >I nose into the driveway, slow, unsure;
> >it feels like trespassing.
> >
> >But no-one comes with shotgun;
> >no passers-by, suspicion in their eyes.
> >
> >I'm alone on the doorstep
> >
> >sorting through the bunch, key after key,
> >until one at last slides in
> >
> >and with slow grind and turn
> >unlocks the future that lurks inside.
> >
> >
> >Gill McEvoy.
> >
>
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