I like this James. A few typos and a few lines I have bracketed which I feel 
could be omitted. Seems like this could be another one of your good series 
of poems about the sea. Bw Sally J


>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New sub: you walk close to the edge
>Date: Sat, 11 Feb 2006 12:48:58 +0000
>
>Continuing with a current series of poems that I am valuing all your 
>comment s on very much.
>
>you walk close to the edge
>
>so dangerously close you
>do not look back or
>inward to the land but out
>over the water and fel
>its radiated cldness reinforced
>by the presure from a wind
>(blowing precisely from the
>South West -) there is
>no engagement with the river today
>(although you are so close -) thge detritus
>on the quay shows where it has been -
>it's moving (away now) with the tide now
  and wonder if (maybe) you could
>part the waves like Moses
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>bw
>James