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----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, January 25, 2006 10:55 AM
Subject: Re: Walking


> Colin, I think I would leave the question mark where it is. Sally J
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>>From: Colin Dewar <[log in to unmask]>
>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>Subject: Re: Walking
>>Date: Wed, 25 Jan 2006 10:19:03 -0000
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>>Sally J,
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>>Thanks for your gardening. Would you put the question mark in a different 
>>position? I often ask this in the (overlong) sentences I use where a 
>>question gradually truns into a statement about something else.
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>>Colin
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>>----- Original Message ----- From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: <[log in to unmask]>
>>Sent: Saturday, January 21, 2006 1:26 PM
>>Subject: Re: Walking
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>>>I realy like this Colin for me just needed a bit of pruning I bracketed a 
>>>feww ords here and there. It is a very thoughtful and meaningful poem for 
>>>me. Best wishes SallyJ
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>>>>From: Colin Dewar <[log in to unmask]>
>>>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>>>Subject: Walking
>>>>Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2006 20:40:02 -0000
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>>>>Walking downhill with Lucy
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>>>>Because we are quiet the moment lasts.
>>>>The sun outside the spruce lights the roe,
>>>>before a footstep in the clearing sends it away.
>>>How much time until
>>>>your shoulder is too high to hold -
>>>>to ask that you see what's there in every space
>>>>you come to?( before you change it?)
>>>>
>>>>When you look (for it) you find your familiar self
>>>>in the black mirror of the lochan,
>>>>not the (any) self felt by hare or roe deer.
>>>>Clouds come and go, make what they will of this temporary moon.
>>>>Water lies stilled as memory,
>>>>(as) when you come to (other ) people
>>>>they appear, (as you) recalled from every room you've known.
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