Hi Ryfkah, glad you got round to this one and like this part of the poem.
It's been extensively revised since then.
bw
James
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: Arc
>Date: Sat, 8 Oct 2005 12:34:04 EDT
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>In a message dated 09/24/2005 6:50:20 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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><< menhirs around which each shadowed moment creeps >>
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>What a great line!
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>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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