Hi Sally,
Great!!!
Maybe needs full stops, perhaps a comma or two in some places - but, as the
tiger in the sugar frosties adverts used to say, "Grrrreat!!!"
Bob
>From: Sally Evans <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Tests revised
>Date: Sat, 17 Sep 2005 22:11:25 +0100
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> >>
> >> Tests
> >>
>
> >> Say yes you are
> >> when you have mesmerised a canto
> >> you have spun poems on the web
> >>
> >> the sun falls in spiky diamonds
> >> you wake in the night to change a word
> >>
> >> you still feel writers cramp
> >> and you are afraid you are not
> >>
>
> >> Say yes
> >> when the sky spins to the earth
> >> books lie deep on the table
> >>
> >> a limerick flickers
> >> sonnets scatter sentiments
> >>
> >> memories dance from darknesses
> >> deep music swims round prose
> >>
> >>
> >> but doubt it
> >> if you are proud,
> >> if you turn your head,
> >>
> >> see lesser rather than greater,
> >> count up your conquests,
> >>
> >> if you have no doubts
> >> or these moons are ordinary.
> >>
> >> Sally Evans
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
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