> that I've never been able to get quite right. So I had another fiddle with
> it. Any thoughts?
Only that I like it - especially the third stanza, which
I think could stand alone, if you wanted it to.
Janet
> The Harbour
>
>
> He notes the wind sharpening his throat
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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