I agree, Mark, & can see how, if that last line is let go, more might
emerge.
Doug
On 31-Oct-05, at 1:30 PM, Mark Weiss wrote:
> That's a pretty thoriugh domestication of a piece of wilderness, Judy.
> Misses the point by a mile, I think.
>
> Dave: a very good poem indeed. Tho to my taste the last line doesn't
> make it--feels like more to come is lopped off at the knees. Maybe
> more will come anyway.
>
> Mark
>
>
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The blank page
as merely an interval or
an intrusion. We could not rescue it
nor could we huddle, as if the page were
big enough.
Kathleen Fraser
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