Hmmmm.
I think I liked it better the other way. Those distorted phrases
were fun.
Andrew (if you want it to be more than just a snapshot)
what if you take out the following?
> take it to your reader
> but write it
Otherwise you're writing about writing and I think there's
too much of that around already.
Janet
(Lost my f*ckn voice - hope it comes back by tonight
or might have to miss the reading. Or may go but keep
quiet - very frustrating for me!)
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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