Just one other small nit Fred,
Shouldn't it be *Soldier Field*, assuming you are talking about the home of the Chicago Bears.
Go Bills!!!
Roger
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From: "Roger Collett" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Saturday, September 03, 2005 10:47 AM
Subject: Re: "A Vision" w/ italics
> Fred
>
> after untangling what Judy seems to have said, I basically agree with her but IMHO perhaps it
> might be best to cut section 8 completely. It is much too weak as an ending.
>
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