Yes ! after reading this I got to thinking of 'autumn sloes'-being dark
then gone ! and refs to flowers -hands- pain
Cheers Patrickm
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Sharp, Jill, very.
I like the way
autumn slows
the dark
and gone
works here about 6 months on, too...
Doug
Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta T6G 2E5 Canada
(780) 436 3320
http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm
I don't need to
hold back here
in the union
of forms
Charles Olson
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