Andrew Burke says
> Goddamn it, I always seem to be the contrary guy. I like what you're
> attempting a lot, and I hate gaining a negative rep, but that's how I see
> it, so I hope you will accept what I say in the spirit in which I say it.
Andrew, there's no need to apologise! This is exactly the sort of
constructive criticism I need.
Thanks to those who liked it though and I will keep your comments in
mind also. Having a range of opinions is always very useful.
That last stanza is there because it's the truth! And yes,
an artistic closure - perhaps I'm getting too good at those.
I like cummings too. But you can't usually read
his work aloud and I don't think that's where I want to go.
Janet
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