Like the indentations. You could extend it into l33tsp34k as well.
Possibily use alternate commenting marks - ;;; (LISP) or # (scripting
languages) or REM (BASIC) or // (C++/C)
As Knut says, it's good to dig.
On 10/28/05, Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Today's experiment - you might enjoy (or not!).
> Not sure yet whether I'm taking this too far, or not far enough,
> with the codelike form and alternative spelling.
>
> if
> I
> extend
> beyond skin and phone, sweat and paper, breath and screen
> slipsneaking thru the web and layers and intu
> yu /*a piece of me in yu*/
> then
> I contain a piece, a peace, of
> yu /*all */
> /*yu whu */
> /*have reached me*/
> Will cradle them; will keep them safe
>
> Janet
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> Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> Poems at Proximity:
> http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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>
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