Bro B,
esp liked "I'm edgy and scratchy" and "staring at the screen expecting it
to tell me something in its own tongue" and "it's probably a poem or some
other misfit a lame secular angel intensely looking for attention and
worth every minute of it worth every minute of it." Excellent.
Just a question: Are you and Dominic consulting one another on Snap
"threads"? I've brought it up simply bcuz I most enjoyed in your first Snap
o' the day:
"two ducks waddle up to see me
from the neighbourhood lake
one shits the other
walks in it"
That is some deep . . . um, stuff, Bro!
Truly B,
Judygoldsailboatingprince
----- Original Message -----
From: "Andrew Burke" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, July 20, 2005 12:38 PM
Subject: snap again Burke
peas and potato
at midnight I'm edgy
and scratchy rain
has been through and
night whistles to itself
I am wide-eyed awake
staring at the screen
expecting it to
tell me something
in its own tongue
something is brewing
something is 'up'
something is coming
'around that corner
or whistling down the river
come on, deliver -
to me' I am
crowding in on me
when I'm like this
it's probably a poem
or some other misfit
a lame secular angel
intensely looking
for attention
and worth every minute of it
and worth every
minute of it
Andrew Burke
Mt Lawley
midnight & shortly thereafter
20 july 2005
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