My best thoughts go with you, Stephen.
Frank
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Frank Parker
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Stephen Vincent" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 10:24 AM
Subject: Re: Rose Snap
> Thanks for the comments. I will revisit. It was one of those snaps that
> poured out with little or no reflexivity as to whether things made sense -
> Syllables proposing syllables and hopping along from there.
>
> A generous gift from somewhere to myself and others as I leave for home.
My
> father of 93 - who had a great run - passed away this morning. And now to
> family.
>
> Stephen V
>
>
>
> > This piece accomplishes quite a lot since it persuades its object to
say
> > something truthful about what it is, what it does, and who it has known.
> >
> > And I don't see difficulty with the second line because its last two
words
> > are extracted, hyphenated, set apart, as it were from the text. And by
doing
> > this, Stephen seems to making a gesture of presentation ("here"), as
well as
> > speaking of where the reader/persona has been and wehere we've all
arrived.
> >
> > Gerald S.
> >
> >> Very nice, Stephen.
> >>
> >>> The woman who appears uncombed to shout atop a long
> >>> Open balustrade of white, yellow, red and pale-apricot roses.
> >>
> >> I have trouble reading this part - some rhythmic problem - too many
> >> stresses in the second line perhaps.
> >>
> >> Janet
> >> ------------------------------------------------------
> >> Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> >> Poems at Proximity:
> >> http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
> >> ------------------------------------------------------
> >>
>
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