'darks cold' is what caught me, Jill, but the whole is neatly tied
down. I agree with Stephen.
And one more 'orange'...
Doug
On 3-May-05, at 8:13 PM, Jill Jones wrote:
> Grot among root
> Still thaw
> But the chill
> Crawls a glimmer
> Dawn darks cold
> Hasten and haze
> Hill lines blurr
>
> Ground brown
> Seed furred
> Branch flare
> Splay to orange
> Ochre and flange
> Years fit
> Now for fire
>
>
> Jill Jones
> Marrickville, 8am, 4 May
> 2005
>
>
Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta T6G 2E5 Canada
(780) 436 3320
http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm
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