and also to Frank
JJ
On Thursday, January 20, 2005, at 11:33 PM, Jill Jones wrote:
> Many tankas Andrew,
>
> Issa Jones
>
>
> On Thursday, January 20, 2005, at 01:16 PM, Andrew Burke wrote:
>
>> Yeah, Jill, a great li'l snap (as usual). I like the first verse - and
>> would
>> make it into a contemporary-sounding haiku by dropping 'there's' in
>> the
>> last line.
>>
>> Basho Burke
>>
>>
>>> after the weight
>>> of eleven dreams
>>> the dog shadow
>>>
>>
>>
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Latest books:
Struggle and radiance: ten commentaries (Wild Honey Press)
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http://www.saltpublishing.com
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