Many tankas Andrew,
Issa Jones
On Thursday, January 20, 2005, at 01:16 PM, Andrew Burke wrote:
> Yeah, Jill, a great li'l snap (as usual). I like the first verse - and
> would
> make it into a contemporary-sounding haiku by dropping 'there's' in
> the
> last line.
>
> Basho Burke
>
>
>> after the weight
>> of eleven dreams
>> the dog shadow
>>
>
>
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