Jill, what Andrew said...
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Frank Parker
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Andrew Burke" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Wednesday, January 19, 2005 7:16 PM
Subject: Re: snap
> Yeah, Jill, a great li'l snap (as usual). I like the first verse - and
would
> make it into a contemporary-sounding haiku by dropping 'there's' in the
> last line.
>
> Basho Burke
>
>
> > after the weight
> > of eleven dreams
> > the dog shadow
> >
>
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