Merci, Rebecca . I have an awful block, but reading what Jow wrote,
particularly his apologia, sort of spurred me to let it all hang out.
This was as post modern as I get but it ended up like a sonnet anyway.
mj
Rebecca Seiferle wrote:
>I like your poem, Martin, the texture of it, the many "r's" the most common letter
>in German "Russian Rilkean" Roger Roger" and within the words too, and the way
>it jams as it goes so that
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>>where is she when you really need him
>>counting the haws and kicking against the pricks
>>a debile crooner or a punkah stare
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>has a kind of loopy jazz to it, and that question, where is she when you really
>need him and the German included in the last line are so sharpen the focus, so
>thanks,
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>Rebecca
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