A day or two later, Barry, but thanks. It was +19 in Toronto yesterday,
but apparently a cold wind is blowing in. Here it's still minus 28,
windchill minus 38 -- that's Centigrade.
Doug
On 12-Jan-05, at 8:03 PM, Barry Alpert wrote:
> Doug, I like a number of aspects of your snap. The spatialization,
> the
> coloration, and that unexpected (and effective) linebreak:
>
> above god / s pared fingernail
>
>
> It's supposed to reach 66 F here tomorrow. Barry
>
>
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He takes Erato’s face, dribbling and wild, between his hands
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