I like this very much, Doug. I wonder,however, if it could do without the
"sing" at the end? Seems more a rhetorical device than functional.
Stephen V
Blog: http://stephenvincent.durationpress.com
> 'passion flower'
> beyond cold night
> opening up &
>
> outwarding off
> that tangent
> ial spread of wonder
>
> meant whose fingers meld
> the notes
> whose breath
> scatters all the possibilities
> heartbeating into ears
>
> with just the gentlest brushstroke
> shhh sshhhh
>
> the petals fall
> ing
> sing
>
> Wednesday February 2 2005
>
> Douglas Barbour
> Department of English
> University of Alberta
> Edmonton Alberta T6G 2E5 Canada
> (780) 436 3320
> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm
>
> Reserved books. Reserved land. Reserved flight.
> And still property is theft.
>
> Phyllis Webb
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