Ken
you may feel the need to edit as time goes by, but I agree with
Stephen, there's a lot of power here, & don't lose that if you do.
Doug
On 15-Dec-05, at 11:56 AM, Ken Wolman wrote:
> Started out as a few lines. Would not stop. I had to at points
> yesterday because I knew what I was about and it despise this
> particular impulse to write these Ancient Mariner or Ishmael writings:
> not a poem, but like getting in a plumber to snake out the pipes so
> maybe I can again write again. Give the final exam tonight, wave
> bye-bye, reclaim some life space.
>
> GROUP PORTRAIT
> (for Stephen Katz, 12/16/49-5/30/05)
Douglas Barbour
11655 - 72 Avenue NW
Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9
(780) 436 3320
My roof was once firm
yet now it cannot even
keep the stars out.
Christopher Dewdney
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