I looked at it too, Peter, & lied the sound too, but was really taken
by the 3-D landscape of words falling far .../
Doug
On 24-Nov-05, at 8:58 AM, Peter Ciccariello wrote:
> Thanks for taking a look at it Lawrence, I appreciate it.
>
> -Peter
>
>
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> Sent: Thu, 24 Nov 2005 03:39:51 -0500
> Subject: Re: Snap - The Ferryman
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> ive only had time to read this about one and a half times! peter; and
> there
> are things i want to look at more closely when i have more time; but
> there
> is some fine music in it
>
> thanks
>
> L
> Original Message:
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> From: Peter Ciccariello [log in to unmask]
> Date: Thu, 24 Nov 2005 03:01:00 -0500
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> Subject: Snap - The Ferryman
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>
> The Ferryman
>
> in the riverthread of memory
> the boatman?s oar dips
> leaving rivulets in the mirrored sheer
> of the great oak hull
> you must know your own waterline
> casting off in your shell like this
> crossing is a silent violation
> passing the wildly dancing willows
> the soft mounds of bracken
> from here to there again
> your life is almost over
> the oar dips again
> yet still no closer to shore
>
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>
>
> Peter Ciccariello
> Providence, RI
> 11/24/2005 2:53:04 AM
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Shakespeare
Drag yr mouldy old bones
Up these stairs & tell me
What you died of,
I think
I’ve got it
Too.
Sharon Thesen
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